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That Saturday Night
Contributed by
allymp
on
Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 02:13:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
ApologyPoetry
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I waited for you
That Saturday night
You didn't come home
You had got in a fight
I got a call from the police
You were in bad health
So, I ran to the station
It was like I started to melt
When I got there
I saw your bruised face
I started to cry
and my heart began to race
So, you held my hand
Although you were the one in pain
And as I thought of that
I was filled with shame
I told you I was sorry
For not grabbing your hand
But my mind was in a rush
I just didn't understand
This thing just happened
The thought I can't bare
Because now you lay there
Helpless
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allymp
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2004-06-29 14:13:25]
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Re: That Saturday Night
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 02:31:22 PM AEST
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very sad poem..... I am sorry to hear this.
pixie xx |
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Re: That Saturday Night
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 03:26:01 PM AEST
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Apart from the 'health' and 'melt' rhyme, I thought this poem was thoroughly involving and, or course, tragic.
I've been in a few fights before and this poem drove home the needless pain engendered in others by provocation.
Good write. Keep writing. |
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Re: That Saturday Night
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 02:46:23 AM AEST
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| Sad write. Good though. |
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