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truely rare

Contributed by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 12:45:22 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief









you were my one and only soulmate
my only truelove
now you reside in the stars above
we loved each other with all of our hearts
when death took you away it tore my world apart
i do not believe for me there will ever be another
for life was once rolling in clover
laughter florished everywhere everyday, in all ways
there was a goal to this life
when i was your wife
now i muddle through
spend big parts of life blue
no one else will ever compare
to this love that was
truely rare

i do not know why i write of you
who held my heart so dear
it isn't like you will know
or ever really hear, yet
somewhere deep inside me i
still feel you near
and you help me live out each day
no matter what comes my way
you are my loving soulmate
forever and a day, the only
one who can make me
un-lonely

tears in my eyes as i write this
after all these years i miss your kiss
life would be so much better
if you were still here, lived in bliss
so much of living would matter
our family together, maybe
i still think of you as 'far from home'
as eternally your soul roams
someday i will find paradise in your arms again
although i do not know how or where or when
so many dreams we had died with you
life is not the same
still i carry your name
i write into the universe
share my heartfelt simple verse
for no one else will ever compare
to our love that was so
beautifully
truely rare

§* *§
*|*















Copyright © ladyfawn ... [ 2004-06-29 12:45:22]
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Re: truely rare (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 12:50:02 PM AEST
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I am speechless Nessa this is amazingly beautiful and sad.....

5/5

pixie xx


Re: truely rare (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 01:54:39 PM AEST
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Being your one and only true soul mate I know he heard these words, felt them as you wrote, and stands behind you as you grieve. He will never leave you. That's what makes your love so rare, you know, he'll always be there. This is beautiful. Sadness fills my eyes for such a beauty to feel so alone. Just know, you're never alone. 0:-)
Angel always... Joni


Re: truely rare (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 04:28:29 PM AEST
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(((((((Nessa)))))))

Roses
Larry


Re: truely rare (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 04:39:42 PM AEST
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Oh Sweetie!! I feel your pain / loss/ hurt/ loneliness...all rolled into one.....
Hugs and luv always
Jenni


Re: truely rare (User Rating: 1 )
by Broken_Skin on Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 04:41:20 PM AEST
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The thought of loosing my love
makes me cry, i hope this is fictional..
im guessing it is...
It would be so tragic otherwise
very nice xXx

BS x


Re: truely rare (User Rating: 1 )
by forever_lonely on Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 05:43:51 PM AEST
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Nessa this is truely so very sad

((((((((nessa))))))))

I beautiful write, from deep within the heart, full of emotion and passion and power
Truely so very amazing

A million/5 if i could give it that

Luv n hugs

Luke


Re: truely rare (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 06:39:23 PM AEST
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Nessa; this does so touch my heart and soul as I know this loss. Life does stop being real and becomes a carousel of mornings and nights and hours spent in between trying to fill them up. The loss is ever present and life constantly reminds you they are gone. Find happiness the best you can, until you are together again, my sweet friend.

Hugs,
Rita


Re: truely rare (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 06:57:55 PM AEST
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several people have asked me if this is true, yes, he was 36 when he died, it is quite true:(


Re: truely rare (User Rating: 1 )
by thumper on Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 10:57:00 PM AEST
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This was absolutely beautiful!! My heartfelt sympathies to you. I don't know what I'd do if my husband passed. Feel like this, I imagine. Great write ladyfawn. Kudos!
Thumps ; 0 )


Re: truely rare (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 01:28:05 AM AEST
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Oh...Nessa..I am at loss of words..
(((((Nessa)))))
venkat



Re: truely rare (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 05:58:36 AM AEST
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Crushingly melancholic/nostalgic/inspirational.

Its better to have loved and lost . . . than to have never loved at all - that's my ticket, and you seem to have epitomised this sentiment in a way, with this poem of yours.

At the very least, you can say that at the end of your days, you found your soulmate . . . some people go lifetime over lifetime on this wheel without that rare kind of discovery.

Truly heartfelt, nessa - thanks so much for sharing this one.


Re: truely rare (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 08:51:17 AM AEST
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Theres so much sadness and nostalgia in this write.
And it is a beautiful piece.
* Gives you the hugest hug *


Re: truely rare (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 09:02:18 AM AEST
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Oh Nessa this brought tears to my eyes and I know that he heard these words from you I cant even imagine this loss his roads just took him on a different journey a road trip that seems so unfair I know how much you love and miss him still Im always here Nessa always
10-4


Re: truely rare (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 06:12:23 PM AEST
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*wipes tear away* this is beautiful, has me captivated. excuse me, I need a moment.


Re: truely rare (User Rating: 1 )
by Valerie_Pearson on Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 09:33:29 PM AEST
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Nessa,
So heart-breaking sad but written with so much love, He watches you from above, One day you will meet again, hold up your strength you have a beautfiul light you shine, Take care, Hugs to you, Val


Re: truely rare (User Rating: 1 )
by Merry on Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 09:14:40 AM AEST
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my tears make it hard for me to write a comment - I cannot imagine dealing with such a loss - but one day you will be together again - because that is the way of soulmates.

Hugs
merry


Re: truely rare (User Rating: 1 )
by buchi on Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 02:03:14 PM AEST
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Following quotation from Picasso, about the art he is referring to: "I have never painted anything but what I saw with my eyes." ...There is harmony and richness in this poem...I am surprised at myself that I seriously love this write....


Re: truely rare (User Rating: 1 )
by Bruce on Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 01:19:08 AM AEST
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another truly beautiful write, what a shame it had to b for such sad circumstances


Re: truely rare (User Rating: 1 )
by WinterFawn on Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 01:39:31 PM AEST
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Such sadness in this verse....beautifully composed.

WinterFawn


Re: truely rare (User Rating: 1 )
by tifrob on Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 02:35:15 AM AEST
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This is a beautiful piece of work. I enjoyed reading it.

J~


Re: truely rare (User Rating: 1 )
by Cynthia on Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 09:02:58 PM AEST
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Nessa, I believe your husband is watching over you my friend. He knows your heart is filled with sadness. God will keep his soul safe until you meet again. *hugs* *S* Cynthia


Re: truely rare (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 01:25:36 PM AEST
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This is an awesome poem. I did not get to see the pictures something happened and they did not show up. Your words were heart felt though.


Re: truely rare (User Rating: 1 )
by colinb on Tuesday, 29th July 2014 @ 02:36:04 AM AEST
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beautiful tribute




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