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Im a Poet
Contributed by
Laurel126
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Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 12:03:14 PM in AEST
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Im a poet
You will see it in my eyes
I dont write just for me
I also write for the other guys
To those who feel like no one understands
Think no one cares
I dont write for the attention
Because Im also scared
I feel the same way
I can totally relate
I feel writing poems
Is my only way to escape
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Laurel126
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2004-06-29 12:03:14]
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Re: Im a Poet
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 03:55:39 PM AEST
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If you're not writing for the attention, then why plaster a plea for comments over the introduction in block capitals? Anyway - I'll try to quit bugging you over it. Your poem has a nice sentiment, which would relate to many people in here.
Keep writing, but put a proper introduction into your poems if you want me to comment in future. |
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Re: Im a Poet
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 04:09:28 PM AEST
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Ahh, neptune is too hard on you - I understand your desire for comments, even with the content here - I think you shold keep up the good work, and the more comments, the better you will become.
Chin up! |
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Re: Im a Poet
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by Laurel126 on
Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 04:17:22 PM AEST
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| neptune...i want peoples opinions on my poems..i dont want attention.i just want to hear people's thoughts...i dont write poems with the thought of getting attention i want people to be able to relate..so when you say do it for the attention and its a plea..well ur wrong |
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Re: Im a Poet
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by wakegurl77 on
Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 04:51:21 PM AEST
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thats why we all write i think at least that why i do too its not for attention or prase its to escape and relate too many people dont realize that now and try too hard to write just for the attention
good write |
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