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war
Contributed by
tangle
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Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 05:04:11 AM in AEST
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insomniac
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In a time and place were humanity raced
you were faced down
falling from grace
love and hate all now must wait
war has turned into unfortunate errant
desolate and true many men have died for you
the cost you can not count
this is a wage that haunts rage
steals innocent graves and makes slaves
it has no regrets
all over the world people see
just a glimpse of what should be
through the troubled times
war finds no peace of mind
how much time must it take
AWAKE and see the picture war portrays
TAKE a look, you will find
war has been all but fine
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tangle
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2004-06-29 05:04:11]
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Re: war
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by oldernotwiser on
Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 08:41:35 AM AEST
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| A lot of us were sleepless last night. My biggest wars are internal. Great that you did something productive with your awake time. |
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Re: war
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by emystar on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 07:10:57 AM AEST
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I'm humbled with this write.
some certainly take loss easily when some one from our Country, USA, dies. and on too each other country the same.
It seemss to me that theones that benifit most from war are the polations.
oopppss ddid I say that??
sure did!
Great thought pravoking masterpeice here.
hug, luv, faith, hope,
emy |
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