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Over You

Contributed by InexactExactness on Tuesday, 22nd October 2002 @ 11:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

Too fake for my blood
and too precise it is too dull
The sweet taste of your soul
is all so boring

Remember all of the times
that we once had
Memories from the past
that we used to have
You've become so predictable
and so I'm leaving
So I need to say Goodbye

Lay there on the couch
soaking up perfection
Put up and put you out
you change your sense
of direction now

Remember the great beginnings
that we once had
Memories of those times
have faded back
You've become so boring
and so now I'm leaving
As I say Goodbye

Role your finger in your hair
Hollow brain that isn't there
Can't you see that I'm gone now
and I'm living loud

You'll remember the final ending
that's of this day
A daydream of the future
brings a new beginning
and so now I'm finally leaving
As I scream Goodbye

Copyright © InexactExactness ... [ 2002-10-22 11:00:00]
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Re: Over You (User Rating: 1 )
by Twinky on Thursday, 24th October 2002 @ 12:56:26 AM AEST
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this is a really good poem, i like this part "Remember the great beginnings
that we once had
Memories of those times
have faded back
You've become so boring
and so now I'm leaving
As I say Goodbye " kinda reminds me of a relationship i once had... keep up the good work!

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