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BLooDY GooD-BYe'S
Contributed by
xslashxprettyxskinx
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Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 05:06:58 PM in AEST
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Hello, How are you today?
Good, well... I'm not!
I am crying these tears of loneliness again tonight
Because you forgot all your promises again.
You left me to hold myself up
And give myself a chance
Without doing so yourself.
So I write you this letter,
I hope it gets to you in time-
Because before you know it,
You'll be living out, my bloody good- byes.
Before I take this knife
And slide it from ear to ear
Tell me one reason why I should spare
Someone as meaningless as you.
You think you're something special
But what you dont know is
Only thing special about you-
Is I WILL be removing YOUR insides, tonight.
Wait? For what?
The gun is loaded-
Six shiney bullets,
Waiting to meet you
To shake your hand
And blow you away-
With my bloody good-byes.
Something tells me you're scared
I only snuck through the window and into your bed
So I could lay next to you one more time
Before this knife
Pierces your already cold heart
And sends chills through my spine-
With these bloody good-byes.
You shouldn't have made the promises
You shouldn't have broken my heart
You asked me to forgive you
You asked me to trust you
And now I'm asking-
Say good- bye.
Please.
Pretty please.
No?
Oh well, too late.
The knife slipped,
The trigger too...
This is my bloody good-bye-
To You.
Copyright ©
xslashxprettyxskinx
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2004-06-28 17:06:58]
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Re: BLooDY GooD-BYe'S
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 10:26:31 PM AEST
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| i felt the emotion in this one for sure. very powerful write. its nice to know im not the only one that has psychopathic thoughts. |
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Re: BLooDY GooD-BYe'S
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by BrandySwanson on
Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 10:51:55 PM AEST
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very strong emotional and powerful write great poem
Brandy |
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Re: BLooDY GooD-BYe'S
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 12:24:43 PM AEST
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powerful and expressive.... a great poem
pixie xx |
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Re: BLooDY GooD-BYe'S
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 06:09:23 AM AEST
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As long as all this horrifying expulsion is helping you, Lindsey, I'll keep reading.
I find it perturbing though, I think you should know . . . |
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Re: BLooDY GooD-BYe'S
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by deathdrop on
Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 06:33:56 AM AEST
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it's quite intense and disturbing. would you really do that to some one?
if you would, why? it's sick! |
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Re: BLooDY GooD-BYe'S
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by WestCPunk on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 08:29:47 PM AEST
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| This one was absolutely awesome! It's something i'd like to do to an ex best friend of mine! |
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Re: BLooDY GooD-BYe'S
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by grip-wth-broken-fingers on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 03:13:04 PM AEST
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| i liek this poem its like your actually there and ur the operson saying it like you,ve actually killed them its brilliant good write hey u havnt been on for while how u been ??? -grip- xxxxxxx |
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