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i guess

Contributed by grip-wth-broken-fingers on Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 03:27:27 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

when i open my eyes
all i see is this deluded reality
every things a blur to me
like i,v been blinded by this paiful reality

my mind is empty
these thoughts are taking over me
drowning in my own demise
i try to scream but no seems to hear me

my eyes are sore staring throguth these 4 walls
when daddy left it tore my heart in 2
i felt so ashamed that i couldnt look at you

all my pride has some how to faded away
its not that easy to hold your head up high
when the people you thought would never leave
look you rite in the eyes and say goodbye

feels liek i,m diseased and i can't let you get close to me
i can't seem to feel anything
why am i so numb
i,m so alone and
i guess i need to rip these walls down when i,m ready
but i,m so insecure i dont think i can trust to let you in

Copyright © grip-wth-broken-fingers ... [ 2004-06-28 15:27:27]
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Re: i guess (User Rating: 1 )
by Broken_Skin on Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 05:52:46 AM AEST
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I feel your pain, This poem i would give a 3/4 im not sure. Keep your head high

BS x

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