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Because of you...
Contributed by
redslits44
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Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 02:32:55 PM in AEST
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My wrist are cut, scared and bloody. my heart is broken, shattered and dead. It's amazing what peoples words can do, they can cut your wrist and try to kill you. But not only words actions too, like the time you beat me, it was just me and you. It was supposed to be fun, but your anger took over. You beat me till I lost all respect for you! Now it's gone all that we had, to bad and so sad. but YOU'RE the one that broke my heart!
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Re: Because of you...
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by KurdtBeantheWIKKED on
Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 03:05:07 PM AEST
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Wow!
have you ever heard the song "cruel" by
Tori Amos.
makes me think of it
you should hear it. |
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Re: Because of you...
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by sicknivesevered on
Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 03:06:23 PM AEST
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| Groovy vent. "It was supposed to be fun", hehe. I'm not quite sure how you meant it, but to me it was truthfully funny Welcome to YPDC. =D. |
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Re: Because of you...
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by deadbloodyrose on
Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 03:22:20 PM AEST
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| well written poem.. may i help slaughter the bastard who beat u and hurt u? :) take care.. AMI JO |
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Re: Because of you...
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 10:49:00 PM AEST
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Short harsh and to the point, Excellent write, and a dam good way of venting,maybe time will heal but with so little words you drowned me in a painful imagary.
I hope life treats you better in the future.
Take care
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