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deceptive fate
Contributed by
smackmeplz24
on
Tuesday, 22nd October 2002 @ 08:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Scream a breath
Blink a tear
The unknown
Is always here
Feelings give
Feelings take
Violent love
Deceptive fate
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2002-10-22 08:45:00]
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Re: deceptive fate
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by Ramfire on
Tuesday, 22nd October 2002 @ 08:52:43 AM AEST
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Nice octave. Guess we really never know what the future holds as you so well put it:
"Deceptive fate."
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Re: deceptive fate
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Tuesday, 22nd October 2002 @ 09:27:36 AM AEST
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| This is cool..so much power in an economy of words... I love this style of writing... well done.. |
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Re: deceptive fate
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by MisterRight on
Tuesday, 22nd October 2002 @ 09:41:33 AM AEST
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I enjoyed this. It kind of sounds like it should be part of a song.
Good job and stay away from that violent love.
Curtis |
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Re: deceptive fate
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by kevinTHEpreoccupied on
Tuesday, 22nd October 2002 @ 10:15:53 AM AEST
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| great poem! it really gets out a lot in such little words - very powerful! im actually looking for something like this to use to compete with at drama tournaments - it would make a great conclusion to this other poem that i do. |
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Re: deceptive fate
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 22nd October 2002 @ 10:34:08 AM AEST
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| Very good - you said alot in few words. |
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Re: deceptive fate
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by MnMnMsrcool on
Tuesday, 12th November 2002 @ 03:13:51 AM AEST
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| That is really good!!! i love it!!!!!it is prolly one of my favorite ones of yers! yer other ones are good to but this one is awsome!!! |
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