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Down
Contributed by
Hannah_Heaven
on
Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 01:11:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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i have to fall
to come back to life
the pain and enless blood
dripping down of this knife
is scarring my skin
the nightmares are coming back
they begin...
the night drawls
the shapes crawl
the bleakness of dinner
the struggle to be a winner
in the end it seems so useless this fire
burning my skin
add more fuse let it burn higher
even though i try to run as far as i can go
all the answers swimming i can hear your voice.....no....
its emotion stress im going down
strap less puss on the time line
scrunch my face up frown
i cant believe this
once again you win
as always
im caught
like a discease
tracking my thoughts ahead of me
im living in a sea of dead world
feeling down like me
i cant come to realise the world
is turning upside down
i want to end
i know it doesnt sound bad
i know its not hard to think
that a girl like me
can be suffuring discretly
but its true
and most of it
IS OVER YOU!!!!!!!
Copyright ©
Hannah_Heaven
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2004-06-28 13:11:38]
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Re: Down
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by apollo on
Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 01:19:00 PM AEST
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so tragic. i once was told by a very good friend of mine that you can not live your life for other people. i know this may not make sense but it is truth. i have this gaping hole like an ozone in my soul that i want other people to fill, and everytime that it does not work out and we break up this hole gets larger. you have to find it in yourself to heal this and i know it is tough. you sound like an amazing person and a damn good writer and i dont want to never read your stuff again (new stuff i mean) so you have to do me a favor but most importantly yourself and do what is right and help yourself, good things will come from this i know this. take care. hang in there.
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Re: Down
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by pixie on
Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 01:27:08 PM AEST
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awww this is awful, so sorry for your pain *hugs*
you expressed it greatly and you made your audience feel your pain,
pixie xx |
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