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love of a vampire
Contributed by
vampyrekiss
on
Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 10:23:39 AM in AEST
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You see me as this beautiful creature
My alluring eyes glow red like burning fire
My chiselled cheekbones and aquiline nose Standing against the moon in coal black clothes
My pale skin as cold to touch,
as fields of snow
My life spans past centuries you will never know.
I feed from the life blood of slain mortal man Living in the darkness;
I will never see the sun again.
Though I am immortal, such pain it brings me The ones I love become old and die before me.
A crimson tear falls down my bone white face My heart is full of sorrow and murderous disgrace
It was never my wish to live beyond mortal death
I was brought across by a vampire that stole my last breath
So dance with me my love in my realm of darkness
Be close to me, in my arms and lose your fright
Under the resplendent glow of the ageless moon
To the angelic music of my eternal night
I ask of you, my love, to do one thing for me Let me bring you across so you can be with me
I am so alone and desire for your eternal love We shall live together forever,
under the stars above.
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vampyrekiss
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Re: love of a vampire
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by pixie on
Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 10:44:44 AM AEST
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great poem, love your work.....
pixie xx |
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Re: love of a vampire
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by Monkeybones99 on
Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 10:57:51 AM AEST
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| I just wanted say that through your poem I can feel the sadness of the vampire.....Bravo! |
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Re: love of a vampire
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by Dopetherapy on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 03:34:51 PM AEST
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| This has to be one of the greatest poems i have found on here. One that i actually connect with and enjoyed reading and that i could read over and over again. Its very devouring and seductive. Amazing work! |
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Re: love of a vampire
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by CrimsonTears on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 09:45:20 AM AEST
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great vampire write...i liked it alot...excellent job
Lots of Love
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