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Don't let go (pt 2)

Contributed by booboo on Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 10:10:20 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

we all know what its like,we all
have the same tears,we all
have the fears that are keeping
us scared to live in this world

here i am showing all you can be
there you are just wastting my time
suicide is a crime,i love you,we
all love you,we know you don't know
what to do,thats why i'm here to hellp you

don't let go,i can show you why,don't
let go,you don't want to follow that road
don't let go,theres so many other solutions
don't let go,no no no,don't let go,we all know
and we all care,share with me your hopes and
dreams,i can help you,i know what to do

let go of the knife,life is gonna get better
never pick the kife back up,you don't
know how to use it,please i'm begging you
if you go i don't know what to do

don't let go
don't let go
don't let go
don't let go

when life gets better will you believe me
then that this is wrong,you're so much
stronger than this,i'll miss you so much
we can help eachother,please

don't let go
don't let go

don't let go,i can show you why,don't
let go,you don't want to follow that road
don't let go,theres so many other solutions
don't let go,no no no,don't let go,we all know
and we all care,share with me your hopes and
dreams,i can help you,i know what to do

Copyright © booboo ... [ 2004-06-28 10:10:20]
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Re: Don't let go (pt 2) (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 10:19:35 AM AEST
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this one made me cry!
2 days ago i ran away from home and went up on a multi-story car park roof. i had slit my wrist and every thing...
i was detained under mental health act!
and hand cuffed, an bunged in a cell for 7 hours... then just taken home any way, i wish i'd jumped!!!

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