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Alive Once More
Contributed by
doug
on
Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 12:35:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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does death call to you
is that why your reading this
are you looking for a reason
to take the pills or cut your wrist
or do you want a reason
a reason to exist
something you can fight for
is that why your reading this
I wish that I could help you
to ease away the pain
I wish that I could kiss you
in the mist of pouring rain
would you be my lover
would you be my everything
would you hold my hand
when I end this life of pain
if you'll be my juliet
I'll be your romeo
I just want to feel alive
once more before I go
Copyright ©
doug
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2004-06-28 00:35:19]
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Re: Alive Once More
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by deadbloodyrose on
Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 01:01:42 AM AEST
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| very nicely written it had a nice rhythm and flow to it and had a deep powerful meaning.. great piece.. AMI JO |
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Re: Alive Once More
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by pixie on
Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 10:51:44 AM AEST
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this is a very dark and well written poem, love your style
pixie xx |
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Re: Alive Once More
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by TwEeK on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 11:19:50 AM AEST
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i would...
nice poem, liked it lots!
Tweek |
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