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Don’t Give Up On Her… Right Now
Contributed by
kidpoet_213
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Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 12:32:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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What can I say… to change your mind?
To take heart… for your friend and mine?
She’s living a life in chaos… right now…
Going through a living hell…
Something… neither of us will ever know… how it really feels…
So… please… don’t give up on her… right now
Try and be her friend… somehow…
‘Cause you may be the only one… she feels that she has left…
Don’t leave her side… just when… she may need you the most…
Please… don’t give up on her… right now
I know… she can be annoying… sometimes…
Maybe… that’s the only way she can find…
To express herself…
While she’s struggling in life… just to stay afloat…
She needs to know…
There’s someone out here… who really cares…
Someone… who wants to be her friend…
When she’s shedding those many tears…
Alone…
Even though… it may seem… she’s pushing you away…
Please… don’t give up on her… right now
Just try and understand…
The mess her life has become…
I know… she has to feel… so alone…
So caught up in a life…
In which she has no control…
No where to run…
No where to hide…
No where to turn…
Just dying… inside…
Turning in on herself…
Committing suicide…
Not of the flesh…
But of the heart… the mind…
So… please… don’t give up on her… right now
She’s become… a loner… of sorts…
Solitary… one…
One… who has no goals in life…
No dreams… to satisfy…
No hunger…
No thirst… for life…
No plans… to fall by the wayside…
Just lives life… day by day…
Somewhat… like a drifter… one might say…
Please… don’t give up on her… right now
She needs to have someone… like you… in her life…
Someone who’s strong and true… to be her guide…
Someone to build her up… not tear her apart…
Someone to give her love… from the heart…
Some one who will stay… not just for a little while…
Just to walk in and out of her life…
So… please… don’t give up on her… right now
Show her the love… I know… is in your heart…
Something that she can’t seem to express herself… right now…
Just try and be there for her…
Even if… all you do is pray…
Let her know… you care… somehow…
Let her know… today…
Please… don’t give up on her… right now
Even though… she may push you away…
She needs to know… you’re her friend…
One upon whom… she can count on and always depend…
To be by her side… when she’s reaching out for someone…
To just care about her… to just give her love…
Someone… she can talk to… and feel that she doesn’t have to hide…
When she may feel… her worst fear in life is coming true…
Being abandoned… by everyone… she’s ever known…
Being abandoned… by her family and her friends too…
Worst of all… being abandoned… by you…
So… please… just don’t give up on her… right now…
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2004-06-28 00:32:15]
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Re: Don’t Give Up On Her… Right Now
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by JT on
Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 01:28:29 AM AEST
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What a heartfelt write. This person sounds lucky to have someone like you by their side. Good luck & stand strong
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Re: Don’t Give Up On Her… Right Now
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 07:46:31 AM AEST
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The time to stand by someone and be there for them no matter what is when they are so lost within themselves. Keep on loving.
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Re: Don’t Give Up On Her… Right Now
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by pixie on
Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 10:53:03 AM AEST
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i love poems that are straight from the heart and this one obviusley is...... great stuff, dont give up, keep on going,.
pixie xx |
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