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Monkeys for dinner
Contributed by
norticus
on
Tuesday, 22nd October 2002 @ 07:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Dark.
Moon shadows pass along my fur.
With my nostrils I see you, and I'm coming.
A drop of saliva hangs from a fang.
Your blood will be my blood before the nocturnal sleep.
In the trees you hide.
I hear the wind pass through your hair.
The bark holds my claws and lifts me to you.
Slowly I am risen until I see you facing away.
Still creeping, you're sleeping, my lovely monkey.
Snap! Twig cracks. You see me behind your back.
Leap swift I lunge into my attack.
Smack! I land flat on my back.
I hear your hysterical laugh as I lie in pain.
Hungry.
The morning light burns my eyes.
With my tongue I lick my wounds.
With my ears I still hear your laughter.
jz
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Re: Monkeys for dinner
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by Chrissylee on
Tuesday, 22nd October 2002 @ 07:36:02 AM AEST
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| well done very descriptive and you can see it all unfold as you are reading it well done |
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Re: Monkeys for dinner
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by Kiz on
Saturday, 2nd November 2002 @ 08:45:43 PM AEST
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How many girls? First Candice and now Kim?
I like this poem...i'm not sure how it is suposed to come across, but it bought a smile to my face when it began to ryhme. Good write babe. Kiz's Scale 4.12 |
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Re: Monkeys for dinner
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by darkeyedman on
Sunday, 24th November 2002 @ 10:41:09 PM AEST
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| this was an absolute kick-ass poem. loved it. jim |
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