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Missing You
Contributed by
imaginary
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Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 09:15:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I need to hear your voice
Sarcastic or not
I need to see you smile at me
So our smiles can lock
I need to hear your laugh
Obnoxious as it is
I miss so much about you
I cant live like this
Your there, only a call away
We havn't spoken in so long
Niether of us try anymore
This stubborness is wrong
We're sitting here gaining nothing
But we're stiffening this grudge
Its each trying to move boulders
With a lazy, silent budge
So baby please talk to me
I've learned the cold shoulder hurts
I've been thinking and i love you
So can please just make this work?
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imaginary
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2004-06-27 21:15:27]
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Re: Missing You
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 09:25:50 PM AEST
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Yes it does....good write of longing.. Not mushy at all...
Jenni |
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Re: Missing You
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by pixie on
Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 11:01:10 AM AEST
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lovely, i hope it all works for you both.....
pixie xx |
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Re: Missing You
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by Tomorrow on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 09:49:36 PM AEST
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No Sweetie
Not mushy... It's beauitful... for sure
Just thought a leave a comment...
~Brittney~ |
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