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suck me
Contributed by
i_have_no_name
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Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 08:36:18 PM in AEST
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throw me out and
place me inside a box
wrap me in pretty colours and
place me in a porn store window
wait for somebody to buy me
open me up and see what you got
gag at the sight of
my mangled body but that
just seems to turn you on anyways
while you rape me
you tell me to cry
but i cant becuase i dont know how
or maybe i like this
maybe i want you to
cut my thieghs and
lick them dry
i want your weight to crush
my ribs i want to hear you moan
that you like it when i struggle
you like it when i fight
dont you, and
you like it that you have a wife
and you come find me when YOU want
ill be standing rite where you found me
and ill be carrying what you gave me
but see
you dont seem to understand
you're not getting compensation
my body has lost its core
and you're just raping a whore.
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Re: suck me
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by Kirby on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 09:04:06 PM AEST
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I don't know what to say about this poem. I felt that you are going through a rough time now and say it very well.
"my body has lost its core
and you're just raping a whore."
such powerful words that gave me chills. This is one of the best poems that I have read in a very long time. I loved it the whole way through. Great Write. Love::::Kirby |
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Re: suck me
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by XxLos3r4Lif3xX on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 10:25:03 PM AEST
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Wow this is so powerful,
I love the emotion, It remind's me of everything iv whent throu. You are a vary good writter cant wait to read more,
Love, ~StOrMiE~ |
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Re: suck me
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by secretwind on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 10:35:14 PM AEST
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| Intense....Well written. |
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Re: suck me
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by JT on
Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 01:45:31 AM AEST
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what a powerfull write. I cant say that I relate to it but this poem just screams at you. I was just frozen reading it. Epic
-jt- |
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Re: suck me
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by ArdRi79 on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 11:46:36 AM AEST
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| Wow, I had a girlfriend that had to sell herself to feed herself and habits she picked up, she died in a car crash just as she was getting free from it all, the ones that dont care should burn slow, she never had it in her to write this stuff, well done. |
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Re: suck me
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by Snake on
Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 03:22:22 PM AEST
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| This poem is deep, I loved the way that the imagery tied in with the emotion involoved in the author's thoughts throughout the writing of this peice....Great Job. |
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Re: suck me
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by Broken_Skin on
Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 10:08:00 AM AEST
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Woooh
Dark, disgusting yet seductive in a sadistic way
I loved this
but if this is not fiction i do apologise
5/5 |
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