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i want you.
Contributed by
i_have_no_name
on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 08:07:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
insomniac
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hollow empty dead but im
tied to the world with
my tears and my blood and
these chains bolted to
my brain just make me go insane
i just cant get out and
my feelings are on repeat and
your voice is on repeat and
i know im going crazy when
i do the same thing and
expect it to be different
when really nothings going to change and
when i always hold myself to blame
and i call myself ashamed as i
watch my tears mix with my blood when
all i think about is your voice
telling me you love me and then
telling me you hate me and
i want to scream because
all i want is you
i want to hold you i want
to protect you i want
you to want me but
i cant becuase i hurt you and
you're never going to trust me and
you're never going to love me and
i never want us to end
i want you forever but
im never going to have you
because no one will ever have me
because there's nothing to have
i lost myself at the age of ten and
i knew i would never have myself again
i am not a body or
a soul or a mind
i am a pen and
a piece of paper that
you read and maybe
just maybe
you'd understand that these words are my words
but if you dont or
ever will - thats ok cuz
im not really here im
just what you read im just
what you feel like when you bleed
im your scream and
im all your pain and
im everything you hate but
everything you need.
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i_have_no_name
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2004-06-27 20:07:39]
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Re: i want you.
(User Rating: 1 )
by kidpoet_213 on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 11:42:28 PM AEST
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Whoa! Very intense... blows the reader away!!! Almost reads like a lyric to a song...
Keep witing...
~Donna~ |
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Re: i want you.
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by KurdtBeantheWIKKED on
Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 03:18:35 PM AEST
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Been here.
they make you feel like a machine sometimes
But even a machine can be progamed to love
"and what do I get for my pain, the desire to love" |
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Re: i want you.
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by Broken_Skin on
Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 10:02:10 AM AEST
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Wow i liked the style of this
I feel it could of better better some how
but it was very gripping
the use of the 'ands' and what not at the
ends of the lines was cool
4/5 |
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