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Father
Contributed by
MLCstar
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Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 03:19:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Anger is spreading through my body.
How could you have acted so?
I never thought you able of such actions.
Now I am glad to see you go
Fill my veins with frozen water.
Turn my beating heart to stone.
You claim this is all my fault.
Destroy, then leave me all alone.
Evil’s ugly in the sunlight.
Shown for what you really are.
Though you go back to your pretending,
You can never take what I know.
Flatter yourself no more, my father.
Do you think I trust you now?
I will stay here in the light,
You still live in denial’s shadow.
Burn forever in your soulless torment.
Declaring it’s all someone else’s fault.
Don’t pretend you are capable of love.
Your practiced words do not affect me.
My spilled blood washes my hands of you.
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MLCstar
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Re: Father
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by deadbloodyrose on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 03:22:49 PM AEST
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| very strong powerful and emotional.. i know the feeling of having a father that lacks a heart.. although we got a long better now.. ive lived in a shelter and group home and foster home cuz of him raising his hands to me and yelling cruel things at me.. i hope things get better.. take care.. AMI JO |
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Re: Father
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by Opinionator on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 03:33:37 PM AEST
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| A little bitter arn't we? Your flow is terrible in this poem but the writing is suppose is not that bad. Maybe you should rewrite it. |
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