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The Roaring Seas
Contributed by
brew
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Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 02:37:27 PM in AEST
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The Roaring seas, the crashing waves and the silent cold wind as it moves across the sandy beach
Shells that sit and sink into the cold gritty sand, but some that move into the chilly, salty, water
The seagulls cry out as they see ocean food, jumping from the crashing waves waiting to nibble on a feasting morsel
The sounds of the Crashing waves against the cold hard rocks make a thundering noise
Appears in the distance, a ship on the horizon, waiting to dock and let passengers out to see the Sea, and all its glory
People come from many places to observe the darkness and the beauty of the sea
Children stand and let the cold wind blow on their faces as the reach their tiny hands in the chilling, wet, and salty water
Man and woman look into each others eyes as they listen to crashing sounds of the Ocean and breath in the salty air
Soon they will depart and leave the ocean to be seen and heard by many more
Leaving wet footsteps in the sand, the children, man and woman has made an impressionable journey and its time to end
Now all that is left is the Roaring Sea, crashing waves and the sandy beach
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Re: The Roaring Seas
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by freespirit on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 03:23:55 PM AEST
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Great poem I love the way it flows
sounds a lot like mine thanks for posting
realy enjoyed the read keep up the good work have a good day
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Re: The Roaring Seas
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 03:35:25 PM AEST
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lovely:) warm welcome to ypdc too, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: The Roaring Seas
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by angelav on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 03:43:28 PM AEST
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| What a powerful image. It conjures up the thunderous pounding of a northern shore. I live in Hawaii and the sea is amost like a living creature. Great work. |
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Re: The Roaring Seas
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by RobertKilpatrick on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 07:47:42 PM AEST
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| Took me down to the ocean , great.. |
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