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My Love, I'll Miss You
Contributed by
WorthlesSanity666
on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 02:29:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Oh, my love,
my eyes cry
tormented seas of
devotion to you.
My soul screams
desperate pleas
to look upon you
once again.
My radiance,
why must you
constantly be dimmed by
such evil words
of those who should
care most about you?
My life, my hope,
I'll miss you forever,
and I will never forget
or get over you.
My heart will
crave your presence in it
until the day
I die.
Copyright ©
WorthlesSanity666
... [
2004-06-27 14:29:19]
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Re: My Love, I'll Miss You
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by dandelions_fall_too on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 03:05:46 PM AEST
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Why should she listen to the words of her father over those of love, true love.
Find other ways for you guys to be togather and think of other possible solutions before separating her from her father.Wether it'd be at a public place, or anywhere were lovers can meet. True love will always survive beyond the words of others, dont forget that. Have your words be more powrful than her father's not in a demanding way, but in a way that you never leave her toughts.
I'm glad i got to read your poem. |
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Re: My Love, I'll Miss You
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 06:00:42 PM AEST
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this was beautifully written and tormentingly sad.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: My Love, I'll Miss You
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by faffeee on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 06:43:56 PM AEST
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| simple, but way too true. good write. basically, it made me sad - and thats what good poetry does, it makes you feel. xx |
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Re: My Love, I'll Miss You
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by pixie on
Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 11:11:20 AM AEST
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awww this was really emotional and very sad, you have writtne it very well never the less
pixie xx |
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Re: My Love, I'll Miss You
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by xXxFaygoFetishxXx on
Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 10:11:05 PM AEST
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I can completely relate.
I love this poem.
Thank you for the comment on mine...
and when I do cut.
I do hide it from certain people... I don't want to hurt them because I hurt myself..
Keep writing
::Elizabeth:: |
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