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This is truly summer
Contributed by
Mortis-Dark
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Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 02:21:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
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The sound of joy in the mid-summer air.
Sprinklers running with refreshing drops.
Blades of grass between my toes.
The way I sneeze when it tingles my nose.
This is truly summer.
My slumber lasts til the sun awakes me.
The warmt of what was heat holds me in the night.
The yawn I give when im tired and exhausted.
The wind and smells it brings rejoyce to my sense's
This is truly summer.
Layzing about in the sun.
The smell of the lake.
The laughter of children in their pools.
Food on the grill and all those late night partys.
This is truly summer.
Just me and myself.
Thinking about when its over.
When autumn comes.
A smile bring back all the things ive done.
For this summer has been better than all the rest.
One summer.
The summer.
My summer well spent.
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Re: This is truly summer
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by deadbloodyrose on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 02:24:17 PM AEST
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| a poem of pure beauty.. you did a nice job.. and god am i glad its summer right now... AMI JO |
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Re: This is truly summer
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by dandelions_fall_too on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 03:12:56 PM AEST
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| Its true, summer always brings something special down on to people eveytime it comes. Thanks for reminding me that this one, i should make it much better than the last. |
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Re: This is truly summer
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by freespirit on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 03:26:52 PM AEST
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| great job keepo them comming |
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Re: This is truly summer
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by angelav on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 03:45:38 PM AEST
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| Simply lovely. I can almost smell the BBQ. |
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