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my knight
Contributed by
deadbloodyrose
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Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 02:06:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
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im trapped in a castle called life, kept inside, held captive waiting for my prince to rescue me
the strong walls keep me locked deep in the dungeon, suffocating me, wont let me be free
i lay in my room screaming out for soemeone to help me, wishing someone will hear my cry
chrimson red tears pour out of my eyes as i drown in a pool of my blood thats dry
everyday is the same as the last, dying inside,
struggling to keep myself alive
my attempts are pathetic as i search everywhere for an escape out of this life
a knight comes to my door giving me hope telling me hes gonna set me free, let me out
finally the door is opened and the room is no longer my home as im allowed to walk about
racing to the gates im eager to leave this castle to see the rest of the world
he holds me back, tells me i must not go farther, im struck down with a knife hes hurled
my attempts to escape land me a beating as he brings me down and breaks my heart
thrown into a dungeon smaller than the previous left to suffer as i fall apart
painful thoughts consume my mind as i realize that there is no reason for me to live
in this pathetic room i call my life i have no purpose that i give
paralyzed with depression i lack energy to attempt at plotting out my escape
nothing matters to me anymore taking the knife at my body i begin to scrape
blood pours out and floods my room my body lays there covered on the floor
the life is draing out of me when suddenly theres a loud tap on the door
the most beautiful voice ive ever heard flows out
freely into the air
it brings me such happines that i regret thoughts of suicide how could i dare
the door unlocks, the knob turns, and the door flys back swiftly in my direction
my eyes are stunned standing before me is the greatest piece of perfection
i dare not blink for the presence may be a mirage and i dont want it to vanish
he walked into my life and unlcoked my door it was anyones ultimate wish
slowly he walked over to where i lay and extended his hand and grasped mine
calmly he raised it to his mouth and kissed it sweetly, his lips so divine
instantly the strong secure walls of the castle crumbled to the ground
at that instant i knew that my love, my knight in shining armor had been found
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deadbloodyrose
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2004-06-27 14:06:52]
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Re: my knight
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 03:00:15 PM AEST
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awww......... i was all ready to get a group together to save you, hehe, so happy he arrived, excellent writing:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: my knight
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by dandelions_fall_too on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 03:25:58 PM AEST
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| I think that this is the best description of your love for him, and not only that but it also talks about your life and how everything was before him. Youre not only a lucky lady because he recued you from all that, but he too is a lucky guy because avobe all the wretched girls he could have rescued, ne rescued you....and that makes him pretty lucky too! |
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Re: my knight
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by TheLastStringCut on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 05:17:10 PM AEST
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| Awwww, sweetie! That's the sweetest thing I've ever read. It's very well written, that's for damn sure. That was soooo cute. I love you so much, that was awesome. Teehee, I'm blushing. ::hides:: Rawwr! Great write hun. Mwah! |
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Re: my knight
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by Vermillion on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 02:16:36 PM AEST
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i sit here in awe, awe of your great work of art. beautifuly crafted and brilliantly written. a poem that will stick with me.
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