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Letter to Nico
Contributed by
baby_bee
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Tuesday, 22nd October 2002 @ 06:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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our love was a bright light
gleaming through the night
now my world is consumed by darkness
i fumble for the switch
help me
let me help you
find the light
like a child abandonded by her parents
i may be better off without you
but i long for you still
wondering what could have been
why you left
help me
let me help you
understand
days once filled with anticipation of your words
now days of agony because of our words
regret lies like a lion in wait
our love the prey
help me
let me help you
forgiveness
Copyright ©
baby_bee
... [
2002-10-22 06:00:00]
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Re: Letter to Nico
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 22nd October 2002 @ 06:54:08 AM AEST
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Hey..I loved this....sad but good imagery..
Jenni |
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Re: Letter to Nico
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by darkeyedman on
Sunday, 24th November 2002 @ 10:39:38 PM AEST
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| good poem, liked the lion in wait similie |
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Re: Letter to Nico
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by Smooth on
Saturday, 14th December 2002 @ 09:52:37 AM AEST
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| sometimes its not easy to love that someone is it? Sometimes it's more work than we expected. I loved this poem, I think it speaks to a place that anyone who has loved someone has been, thank you for sharing... there is a lot of struggle within this write, I agree, great imagery and remember, love is always worth it... the mystery of it clouds our judgement, but if you can make it through the turmoil, doesn't that feeling of "we made it" rock??!!!!! lol Thanks for sharing Bee |
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Re: Letter to Nico
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by Roshie on
Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 08:23:50 PM AEST
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| This poem is very well written, it expresses your emotion well. Try to keep smiling thats all you can do. For a smile one your face leads to a smile on someone elses, keep yourself and others happy, and love will find it's way back to you. =) |
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