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I'll Paint You A Rainbow
Contributed by
pixie
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Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 12:30:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I’d paint you a colourful rainbow,
Love your body nice and slow,
Steal a star down from the sky,
Kiss your tears when you cry.
Part the sea’s for you to walk,
Hang on your word when you talk,
Keep a smile upon your face,
Take you to that special place.
I’ll make the birds sing for you,
Stop you from ever feeling blue,
I’d make the sun forever shine,
Turn your water into wine.
I’d wrap you up in cotton wool,
Make sure that your glass was full,
Water your heart every day,
Direct you in the right way.
I’ll make the flowers bloom,
Take away your feelings of gloom,
Make the whole world spin,
I’d commit for you any sin.
Stop the rain from falling,
Prompt the angels to keep calling,
I’d do anything that you wanted,
For you any wish can be granted.
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Re: I'll Paint You A Rainbow
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by Jackee_line on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 12:49:10 PM AEST
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| sweet...... |
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Re: I'll Paint You A Rainbow
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 02:23:06 PM AEST
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sounds like love to me! pixie! lol, this is so sweet and so full of love, simply beautiful:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: I'll Paint You A Rainbow
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by deadbloodyrose on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 02:27:09 PM AEST
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| very touching.. the love of you life is a very lucky person..you poem was full of pure beauty and like all your work had a great rhythm and flow to it.. another excellent piece.. nice job. AMI JO |
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Re: I'll Paint You A Rainbow
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by Luinil on
Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 09:24:52 AM AEST
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| very beautiful * |
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Re: I'll Paint You A Rainbow
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 10:21:22 AM AEST
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| very sweet |
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Re: I'll Paint You A Rainbow
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by yellow_sundragon on
Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 12:34:12 PM AEST
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Man, I'm almost jealous of whomever this poem was written for... and I hope that they return your feelings...
It's beautiful...
Jaime |
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