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Party Dress
Contributed by
jary
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Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 11:25:47 AM in AEST
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Consder me in my party dress.
Such a dirty little pretty mess.
My knees are scabbed and clothes are torn.
Not the first time this dress has been worn.
I'm rhyming in my schoolgirl drawl.
It's better than letting go of the bright red ball.
Chipped fingernails, cracking, shaking
Is there anything worse than eternal waking?
I cried, I sought, I prayed, I lied, I called a friend.
But nothing could put my party dress back together again.
Copyright ©
jary
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2004-06-27 11:25:47]
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Re: Party Dress
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by shorty_52 on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 12:29:38 PM AEST
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interesting. good right.
~allyson~
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Re: Party Dress
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 03:14:10 PM AEST
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awww........ very nice writing, warm welcome to ypdc, i look forward to more of your poetry:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Party Dress
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by KarlaMarie on
Saturday, 27th May 2006 @ 12:26:22 AM AEST
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this was really very cute. i enjoyed it immensely
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