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I知 sorry!
Contributed by
deathdrop
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Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 10:33:15 AM in AEST
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I知 so sore,
Where I haven稚 eaten right.
I知 so raw,
From living in this fight.
It hurts so much,
From where the police bruised me!
What ever I touch,
Slowly hates me.
I知 sorry I知 me.
I知 sorry I知 like this.
I知 sorry I知 not at school.
But I知 scared I値l meet her fist.
I知 sorry I知 a coward.
That I try to run from the pain.
It痴 just that when I fight it,
It twists with my brain.
I知 sorry I ran away yesterday.
I知 sorry I cut again.
I知 sorry I can稚 give up self-harm.
I知 sorry I live in my stain.
I知 sorry I went up on the roof,
I知 sorry I didn稚 jump!
舛oz for everything this pain is worth.
It could have saved me some future thumps.
Copyright ﾂｩ
deathdrop
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2004-06-27 10:33:15]
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Re: I知 sorry!
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by RockNwhls on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 11:18:34 AM AEST
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| moving....i'm sorry you feel so much pain. i hope it gets better. |
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Re: I知 sorry!
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by Trisha on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 11:31:51 AM AEST
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| This Is Sad |
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Re: I知 sorry!
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by pixie on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 12:10:02 PM AEST
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this is a very emotional write.... *hugs you*
dont be so hard on yourself, your strength will come one day, just be patient..
pixie xx |
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Re: I知 sorry!
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by shorty_52 on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 12:35:54 PM AEST
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first of all. good poem u expresed urself very well. secondly. u don't need to b sorry for most of the stuff in ur poem. i'm glad u didn't jump, lifes to short anyway, so y make it shorter?
~allyson~ |
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Re: I知 sorry!
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by shorty_52 on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 12:35:56 PM AEST
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first of all. good poem u expresed urself very well. secondly. u don't need to b sorry for most of the stuff in ur poem. i'm glad u didn't jump, lifes to short anyway, so y make it shorter?
~allyson~ |
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Re: I知 sorry!
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by brew on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 01:57:42 PM AEST
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| Seems you must have a deep back ground. Just know there are people out there to help, and that care! |
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