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shes a lonely player
Contributed by
tangle
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Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 03:10:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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the girl in you i once knew
single and free always wanting to be
he stepped in front of me
> you accepted him
i was hurt
life lessons suck even if they are for the better
i would not try to taste love when pain is digested
my brain screams with a lost dream
truth is not present
lies are not evident
she was a girl not meant for my world
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tangle
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2004-06-27 03:10:42]
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Re: shes a lonely player
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by Colleen on
Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 09:42:25 PM AEST
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| I really like that poem, it is very deep. It's good to see that sometimes people really aren't meant for certain aspects of your life. |
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Re: shes a lonely player
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by emystar on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 07:02:42 AM AEST
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Very moving write!
Really sweet. Full of passion from the soul.
Touches the heart like a magnent.
five ***** for this heartwrenching masterpeice.
huggs, hope, peace,
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