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you told me
Contributed by
lonely_boy
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Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 12:51:26 AM in AEST
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YOU TOLD ME
You told me that you hate me
That hurt me so bad
I don’t know what to feel anymore
I love you, but then again, I wish that you would die
Harsh is what I say
But it’s the truth
Why would I lie again to you once more
The last time I did our hearts were torn
Well mine was I’m not sure about yours
I want to cut myself for what you told me
And sit in my room just watching my arm bleed
I just called to talk to you
But what I got back was “I never want to see you or here you ever again!”
I started to cry at that moment
I despise the fact that I’m still alive
There’s no point in living, I want to die
I want to see you, but I’ll just ***** you off
But why not, I might be better off doing just that
Maybe I should cut myself
It would be a way out of my pain
Or would it be an escape for right now
I don’t care what happens to me
All I want right now is to see you once more
And maybe then I’ll kill myself
Then I’ll be really lucky
I hate myself for letting you down and me asking for forgiveness
I just wanted to hold you close
But that’s all in the past
Now I just want to kiss you and say good-bye
But how can I say good-bye to you when I can’t even say it to myself
My answers are held within you so I need to know
Why am I still going through this pain and agony
I should be dead and never to be remembered
I want to cry right now but all my tears are left in my room
And I have no motivation to go retrieve those worthless emotions
I still love you very much
I never wanted it to go this far
It’s not a game to me, it’s love
I’ve screwed up once, have I done it again
I gave up on caring, but I still care for you
But I still don’t know how you will react to this
So maybe if I’m lucky it’ll be you that slit’s my wrist
Why is it that this always happens to me
I find a girl, and then we turn to *****
I don’t know what I’m suppose to do, I still can’t get over what you told me
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Re: you told me
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by emystar on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 12:59:52 AM AEST
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Very sad write. it's written well tho.
U need to luv yourself then things will change in your life.
Jus because one person said they hate u in maybe the heat of the moment that's no reason to die.
As long as u still breathe there' plenty ho[pe for u but u gotta reach out and grab it.
luv, huggs, prayers, peace,
emy
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Re: you told me
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by blackmarker on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 01:34:21 AM AEST
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Fabulous write, the emotion is so.. raw and pure.
I hope that this is just a fictional piece that you wrote because you were feeling down, and that you didn't actually hurt yourself at all. I feel like this sometimes, but I've realized, it's not worth hurting myself over someone who doesn't matter. They seem like they matter, of course, but if you feel a certain way about someone and they don't feel the same way, why waste your time? Find someone else, someone worth your time and your emotions and your love. Don't give up just because things went wrong once.
Anyways, I'm rambling. Great write, powerful. |
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Re: you told me
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by pixie on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 10:52:12 AM AEST
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*hugs you * awwww this is such an emotional piece of writing, well done for expressing it so well
pixie xx |
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Re: you told me
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by corrupted_minds on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 04:20:43 AM AEST
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This is really beautiful.. good write thanks for sharing it with us. Keep up the good writing.
I can relate to your work so much, that i have begun reading through all of them. Keep posting cos i'm loving reading them.
love always
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