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Little Girl Lost
Contributed by
kidpoet_213
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Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 12:21:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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You're just a little girl lost...
In the great wilderness of life...
Not yet... grown up...
And yet... you're not a child...
Just somewhere in between...
Searching for an identity...
You can call your own...
Wanting to live life to the max...
Over the top... wanting to be free
And not really understanding... yet... what this life really means...
You're just struggling to stay afloat...
In your quest for fun and excitement...
Only to find... that it's the wrong kind...
And will get you into trouble... every time...
You're just a little girl lost...
In the great wilderness of life...
You're just wondering... where you fit... in the scheme of things
In the rhyme of life...
A place where you can find no rhythm...
'Cause you believe... in your heart...
That everyone who knows you...
Everyone who's close to you...
And loves you... so...
Doesn't have time for you...
Doesn't care at all...
They're too busy with problems of their own...
To worry about you...
Well... babe... that's just not true...
Oh... how we all love you... so...
You're just a little girl lost...
In the great wilderness of life...
You're just a child alone...
You have been all your life...
Craving for attention...
So... you hang out with the wrong crowd...
And you do "wild things"... sometimes...
Even though... you know what's right... what's wrong...
You don't know why... you do it...
But... if it goes too far...
You're gonna pay the ultimate price....
You're just a little girl lost...
In the great wilderness of life...
I've got you in my heart... now...
And you're always on my mind...
A young woman... who's far away from that little girl...
I met... not so long ago...
With those beautiful eyes of blue...
That sparkled and shined like pools of diamonds ...
Who... to me...wouldn't even say boo...
When I spoke to her... she just stared at her shoes...
Now... you're just a little girl lost...
In the great wilderness of life...
For inside that little girl...
Lies the beautiful... beautiful soul...
Of a young woman...
Just needing to be found....
Who sometimes seems to be crying out...
"Someone... please rescue me... from myself!"
You're just a little girl lost...
In the great wilderness of life...
Not yet... grown up...
And yet... you're not a child...
Just somewhere in between...
Just a little girl lost...
In the scheme of things...
Just a little girl lost...
In the darkness of life...
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2004-06-27 00:21:19]
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Re: Little Girl Lost
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 12:26:22 AM AEST
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| excellent write. im glad you arent giving up on her, because she must have so much potential in life. many people have done the things she has, and many have learned better; i hope she is one of them. those ellipsises were making me go crosseyed, lol. =]] |
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Re: Little Girl Lost
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by emystar on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 12:48:21 AM AEST
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Very good write as u reach out to help someone. Sounds to me like puberty. Jus maybe once she gets thru that you'll proberly see a big change for the good.
Hang tuff and keep encouraging her.
Continue with the luv-n-prayers. Don't let anyone judge her 'cause if they do she will jus rebele.
Keep up the good work.
luv, huggs,
yo momma,
emy
I'll try-n-catch u on im when I get caught up a bit. |
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Re: Little Girl Lost
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 12:55:17 AM AEST
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Never give up on someone you love. We all need soft arms to fall into when we do fall and we all eventually do. It is hard growing up nowdays. They are expected to be so adult and yet they are having to learn how. Not a fun time for them either. Stay strong in your convictions and hopefully she will be alright at the end.
Love,
Rita |
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Re: Little Girl Lost
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 01:08:24 AM AEST
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I really liked this a lot keep it up and keep it coming...
Im so sorry for your loss and dont give up because love is endless please never give up...
thanks for the comment on mine...and if u need someone to talk to Im always here for you...just if you need to vent or talk...
keep your head held high...
much love,
Dani
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