|
Menu
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
Once upon a time
Contributed by
Living_In_My_Dream
on
Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 11:59:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
|
Once upon a time
You'd weave daisies through my hair
I was sung lullabies
and love we would always share
Once upon a time
You would make it all okay
and I didnt hide behind my smile
cuz you kissed my tears away
Once upon a time
It didn't hurt to love you
The only escape I did
was what I knew how to do
Once upon a time
I used to dream of you
But I couldn't wait to awaken
to what I was use to
Once upon a time
I would face my fears
Lost in sleep
Drowning in blood and tears
Once upon a time
to either sleep or cry
I was lost in sleep
To destroy myself and die
Once upon a time
I used to believe I could warn my star
Or atleast move the glaciers
But now Im not alive, and way to far
Once upon a time...
Copyright ©
Living_In_My_Dream
... [
2004-06-26 23:59:27] (Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment. That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Once upon a time
(User Rating: 1 ) by deadbloodyrose on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 12:04:25 AM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
wonderful poem.. u did a really nice job it was beautifully written.. love is pain.. AMI JO |
|
|
Re: Once upon a time
(User Rating: 1 ) by TheLastStringCut on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 12:10:42 AM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
That was pretty beautiful, however it was also sad. I seem to get a lotta sadness coming from your poems. Are you okay? It was a nice poem, and I liked it. Good Job.
-Jeff |
|
|
Re: Once upon a time
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 12:20:30 AM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
i loved this poem. a person can make the biggest difference to someone and not even know it. it also shows the cycle of things in a way. excellent write dani. |
|
|
Re: Once upon a time
(User Rating: 1 ) by SpreadYourWings on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 12:42:37 AM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
That was a very beautiful poem. Best of luck to you in the future. Hold On |
|
|
Re: Once upon a time
(User Rating: 1 ) by pixie on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 11:07:21 AM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
this is very deep and emotional. made me feel very sad *hugs you*
pixie xx |
|
|
Re: Once upon a time
(User Rating: 1 ) by holderofthestone on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 03:26:31 PM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
I know what its like to give your best and still feel inadequate. another good poem. as always loved reading. A++++ |
|
|
|