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The boy who took my life
Contributed by
Living_In_My_Dream
on
Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 11:44:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I stare at the bottle
Spill out the pills
Swallow them
The pills that kill
I think of him
How he broke my heart
He knew I loved him
Then pushed us apart
I lay on my bed
Getting more drowsy and I know
I'll love him even in death
I cant let go
Even as my heart stops beating
And my last breath dies
The last minute I live
He's on my mind
The boy I love
Who I thought was right
He took my life
He dimmed my light
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Living_In_My_Dream
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2004-06-26 23:44:25]
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Re: The boy who took my life
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by deadbloodyrose on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 12:13:45 AM AEST
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| *can relate* nice poem.. well written.. after you think youre gonna die..but somehow ive found a way to move on.. and found someone much better (TheLastStringCut) i hope it works out the same way for you.. take care.. AMI JO |
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Re: The boy who took my life
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by TheLastStringCut on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 12:20:15 AM AEST
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Awwww, I'm sorry you feel that way hun. I loved the poem, it was so deep, and had great meaning. I, too, have felt the same way. Jus' don't do what I did, that would be bad. "It all works out in the end, my friend, it all works out in the end." ^___^
The poem rawked.
-Jeff |
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Re: The boy who took my life
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by pixie on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 11:14:35 AM AEST
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i too can relate , this was a very grim write, but from the heart..... no-one is worth doing this over tho, you must try and pick up the pieces and move on,
takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: The boy who took my life
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by MissMandy on
Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 06:38:49 PM AEST
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| Guys suck, i definitely can relate. Feel better. Great poem. |
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Re: The boy who took my life
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by mlcarter369 on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 03:41:02 AM AEST
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i had a guy who did that to me and i felt like dying was the only way so i really relate to this poem it is verry well written
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Re: The boy who took my life
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by badboyzlover on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 05:43:05 PM AEST
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| Real great write. Guyz are hot but total *****. dont let them get you down. Dont OD over them either. |
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