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My Heart Bleeds
Contributed by
essentially9
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Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 10:59:43 PM in AEST
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My Heart Bleeds
There is nothing to say
My heart bleeds
From what I did to thee
From what you did to me
My heart bleeds
From of what you told me
I am nothing
In the eyes of the beholder
I betrayed you
In every way I could
And now I pay
For what I did to you
And I can't believe
What you believe me to be
Perception is everything
To you I'll never be
Anything
My heart bleeds
From what you believe
My mind sees
What you believe
My soul's free
To leave me
I bleed for release
Because I can't live
With what I did
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Re: My Heart Bleeds
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by TheVoice on
Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 11:16:21 PM AEST
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VERY powerful write. No one is perfect. Bad judgement, poor decisions, wrong doings are going to happen in life. Learn from your mistakes to be the beter person you want to be.
The Voice
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Re: My Heart Bleeds
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by emystar on
Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 11:25:34 PM AEST
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Take it easy on yourself, please.
We are all jus humaan and we all make mistakes. Who ever said these things to u should go take a long hard look in the mirror.U should tell this person "Let the first one among us with out sin let him cast the first stone. They were gonna stone the women in the bible and when Jesus said that then he put um all in their place as we are born into sin.
It doesn't matter what u did no one has the right to make u fell this way. If we all gave up 'cause we wronged someone then we would all be dead.
So please take it easy on yourself.
Luv, huggs, courage,
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Re: My Heart Bleeds
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by deadbloodyrose on
Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 11:28:14 PM AEST
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| nice write..powerful.. everyone makes mistakes in life.. thats how we learn.. we wouldnt get anywhere without learning lifes lessons on the way..i hope everything turns out alright.. take care.. AMI JO |
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Re: My Heart Bleeds
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by Dereku on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 12:32:02 AM AEST
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I somewhat agree with my other commentors above me. Whoever said this to make you feel this way...well...forget about it. Don't be so hard on yourself, and don't worry about it so much. Sometimes, you gotta take things in stride, and be sure to throw them behind you on your trail to HAPPINESS!!!! ^_^
To quote the great Bobby McFerrin
Don't worry, be happy! |
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Re: My Heart Bleeds
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by angelav on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 02:50:12 AM AEST
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| Forgive yourself. It's all good. All things are for a reason...and sometimes what doesn't kill you makes you stronger. Trust me, I know. Forgiveness is a hard nut to crack, but worth it in the end. |
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Re: My Heart Bleeds
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 10:24:08 AM AEST
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awww...... we all make mistakes, beautifully expression of feelings here, big hugs n' love nessa
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Re: My Heart Bleeds
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by pixie on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 11:16:30 AM AEST
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you shouldnt be too hard oin yourself, as we as humans make mistakes and we learn by them..... takecare, you written this very well, and honestly
pixie xx |
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