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Just Like You
Contributed by
Alyshia
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Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 10:28:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I am just like you, I feel
Alone and scared, I bleed
Alone and cold, I dream
Ashamed and upset, I am naive
I am just like you, I know
Depressing feelings, so alone
We're not alone, or so it goes
Proud and unsure, here I go
I am just like you, I feel
Alone and confused, I seek
The help and support I need
To help fulfill my dream
I am just like you, I bleed
Warm and crimson, it streams
Into and corrupts my dreams
Until no blood is left to bleed
Copyright ©
Alyshia
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2004-06-26 22:28:05]
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Re: Just Like You
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by emystar on
Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 11:37:03 PM AEST
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Great writing as we all bleed in one way or another.
Hang tuff.
peace, luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Just Like You
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 01:15:53 AM AEST
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omg, this poem is awesome! u have real talent.
I am just like you, I bleed
Warm and crimson, it streams
Into and corrupts my dreams
Until no blood is left to bleed
This waz my favourite part. Ne particular person u had in mind 2 b like??? |
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