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ELOQUENCE
Contributed by
RobertKilpatrick
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Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 06:51:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Eloquence of love, where have you been?
Strutting alone on a maidenship fair
Ive looked for you, no where to be seen
But someone found you, in a Green eyed stare
Swans sleep tonight, on a song from Beethoven
Oaks weep beyond, the White lily streams
To the unheard sounds, that are timely woven
Of the woods, that are made into great splendid beams.
© Robert Kilpatrick
Copyright ©
RobertKilpatrick
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2004-06-26 18:51:36]
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Re: ELOQUENCE
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 07:24:37 PM AEST
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Robert, this is so serenely beautiful.
Rita |
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Re: ELOQUENCE
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by angelav on
Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 07:29:21 PM AEST
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| So lovely. Thanks for sharing. |
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Re: ELOQUENCE
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 09:34:07 PM AEST
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this is really very lovely......" eloquent" to say the least....
Jenni |
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Re: ELOQUENCE
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by Glo on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 07:52:38 PM AEST
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Very nice poem. It brings a calm over me. I think it's the unheard sounds...so peaceful. Thanks for posting.
Glo! |
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Re: ELOQUENCE
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by OMEGA_ on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 05:58:43 PM AEST
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This one is a masterpiece
good work |
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Re: ELOQUENCE
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 12:13:36 AM AEST
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| peaceful, eloquent, moving. this is a great great love poem. i respect you very much |
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