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First Flight
Contributed by
Charles
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Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 04:23:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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First Flight
Remember
what our ten-year-old
love
felt like
that heat-laden afternoon
when we held hands
a first time
and stopped along the pond
to watch a red-wing
in the rushes
observing us
from its reedy perch
swaying,
as if prying
that tender moment
into our deep hearts
for a lifetime--
or was it only in mine?
from: Along the Way
Copyright ©
Charles
... [
2004-06-26 16:23:33]
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Re: First Flight
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 07:45:46 PM AEST
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Left me sad that you even had to wonder. Left my heart rather aching for an answer to your question. Maybe that was the answer.
Smiles,
Rita |
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Re: First Flight
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 3rd March 2005 @ 06:40:59 AM AEST
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Well defined.
Please share some of your opinions with us - this site is supposed to be interactive, Charles . . . |
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