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YOU!
Contributed by
viola
on
Monday, 21st October 2002 @ 06:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Waiting
by the phone
alone
for your voice.
Listening
down the line
all this time
for a sweet word.
Looking
forever to find
the one line
to reach you.
Found
all I can say
every day
is this...
I love you.
Copyright ©
viola
... [
2002-10-21 18:00:00]
(Date/Time posted on
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Re: YOU!
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by Chrissylee on
Monday, 21st October 2002 @ 06:13:10 PM AEST
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the only thing you can do is reach out and give your heart and if he doesn't respond back then you know its time to move on... i wish you luck,
love peace and happy poetry |
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Re: YOU!
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by aernby on
Monday, 21st October 2002 @ 08:15:19 PM AEST
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a good write
aern + |
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Re: YOU!
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by aernby on
Monday, 21st October 2002 @ 08:16:10 PM AEST
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| a good write |
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Re: YOU!
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by Jackee_line on
Monday, 21st October 2002 @ 08:32:36 PM AEST
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| I relate to the poem,great write |
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Re: YOU!
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by lil_angel on
Tuesday, 22nd October 2002 @ 01:07:10 AM AEST
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| LOVE IS A HARD THING FOR ALL PEOPLE TO GO THROUGH..I WISH YOU THE BEST OF THE WORLD. |
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Re: YOU!
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by MisterRight on
Tuesday, 22nd October 2002 @ 02:36:03 AM AEST
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This is really a fantastic poem. Short, simple, and powerful. I can relate completely.
Excellent work!
Curtis
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Re: YOU!
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by norticus on
Tuesday, 22nd October 2002 @ 04:01:50 AM AEST
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| I give this a 4.519er on the Nortiscale. It's a goody that everyone can love and memorize. |
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Re: YOU!
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by OysterMoon on
Tuesday, 22nd October 2002 @ 05:39:58 AM AEST
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| loved it! |
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Re: YOU!
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by addie on
Saturday, 26th October 2002 @ 03:56:13 AM AEST
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that was simple and beautiful.... well done
take care
addie |
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