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Shell phish
Contributed by
rhei76
on
Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 03:57:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Silverware
In my arm
She don't care
I was wrong
Hates me now
And somehow
Caught the cow
That herds
America
Torn the whip
With the tip
Of her id
Slashed my eyes
So I could never see again
She took my will
I gave up
She tried to kill
I fell down
She had her thrills
As I burned away
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Re: Shell phish
(User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on
Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 06:00:18 PM AEST
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I like this...its...unusual. lol
"She took my will
I gave up
She tried to kill
I fell down
She had her thrills
As I burned away"
those lines just call to me.
great write.
*hugs* Phil xxx
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Re: Shell phish
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by emystar on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 05:19:39 AM AEST
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Caught the cow
that herds
Aamerica. That's my favorite lines.
Good writing and definently unique.
hug, luv,
emy |
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Re: Shell phish
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by pixie on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 11:51:00 AM AEST
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very good write.....
pixie xx |
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