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My Vent
Contributed by
nail-to-the-head
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Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 03:31:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I have found a vent,
A way to get them out,
My feelings that have trap me,
But have made me who I am,
I found my vent,
A small, sharp blade,
To cut and drain my dirty blood,
Blood that has curdled in pain,
I found my vent,
Its helps me to live,
Giving me one more chance,
To break from this cycle,
I found my vent,
It seems to scar,
Deep purple lines stained,
Reminding me of the past,
I found my vent,
Its my way out,
A loop-hole in this life,
But why do I deserve it?
+ nail-to-the-head +
25.06.04
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Re: My Vent
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 04:13:10 PM AEST
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I self mutilate too and I wouldnt say that its forced upon me, or inevitable as your sort of saying here.
This is written with feeling
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Re: My Vent
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by pixie on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 11:56:01 AM AEST
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I too used to cut myself, but have found other more positive vents, like my poetry wtiting, hope you one day become strong enuff to no longer feel the need to do this hun, takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: My Vent
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 02:43:14 PM AEST
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| I dunno what to tell you, hun. I cut, I'm trying not to do it too much. I know it's tough, just try to write and write so it'll keep your hands busy and express emotion. See how long you can hold out w/o picking up the blade. Just see if you can wait out the urges and think, how will this benefit me in the future? What will I have gained? A bunch of scars you're always going to have to cover w/ sleeves or whatever. Just try to wait it out and write. It was a really good poem. I really felt it. |
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Re: My Vent
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by Stoney1 on
Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 01:48:59 PM AEST
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What is it with the self cutting? Didn't realize that this was
such a big thing. Is there a club?
I had a stormy period when my first marriage broke up and I
had a lot of rage. I got in a lot of fights; things that I'd generally
let slide on other occasions would send me into a rage and
the fists would be flying. I guess that's sort of a self destructive
reflex. only I worked my way through it before I got seriously hurt,
or seriously hurt anyone else.
I discovered hookers!
Stoney |
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