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meeting
Contributed by
deadbloodyrose
on
Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 02:14:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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untidy black hair dangling in her face, rain pounding on her cold body
mascara streaming down, pouring out mixing in with her salty tears
thrifty clothes dangling off her body, occupying more space than her
walking aimlessly, having no one to socialize with, no place to escape to
passery byers see her pain, see torture in here eyes, dont try and help
she glances into the windows, sees items she use to treausre, no longer desires
mind focused on life colides with man sharing similar problems, same feelings
utter words of apology still staring at the ground, trying to move on
briefly eyes go up, they lock and cant seem to turn away, dont blink
the lonely girls heart skips a beat, she loves the way he looks
for once her mind isnt thinking of death, shes amazed at the sight before her
stunned by the beauty of this man, intrigued in knowing more
he opens his mouth and utters his shaky apology again, barely audible
quiet yet sweet voice, candy to her ears, most beautiful voice
never before has seh heard a more soothing sound, longs to hear more
after a few seconds of gazing into his gorgeous eyes, she too speaks out
letting him know it was ok and no damage was done, finally blinking
a few more words slip out, small conversation made between them
walking to the beach they share their lives, their problems
deep conversation, tears pour out from both sets of eyes, flooding
smiles spread across their faces, the first in a few months, biggest grin
everyday they meet, sharing everything, including their love forever
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2004-06-26 14:14:10]
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Re: meeting
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by Vermillion on
Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 02:19:08 PM AEST
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i cant think of anything else to say other than...absolutly breath taking.
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Re: meeting
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by TheLastStringCut on
Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 10:32:30 PM AEST
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| Awwww, that's really cute. Don't know who it's about if anyone, but that is really damned good. I like it! Bravo hun. I love you! Toodles. |
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Re: meeting
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 07:00:34 PM AEST
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| :-P I'm jealous of the woman in the poem. I hope that happens to me soon! great job invoking emotions! |
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