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Princess In Love
Contributed by
pixie
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Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 12:32:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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She brushes her long golden hair,
Fixes her prince with a loving stare,
Wishes their love wasn’t a dark secret,
She didn’t know how if she could keep it.
She used to daydream about running away,
Finding a secluded place they could stay,
Instead of going through this pain,
But she kept her silence in vain.
Her heart was in love, but still hung low,
For she keep it locked up for no-one to know,
Why was their love so forbidden,
Why couldn’t a blessing be given?
At night she’d cry into her hands,
Whilst looking out over the forest lands,
Hoping & wishing upon a star,
That her true love would go far.
They are together in her dreams,
In sleep the can be free, or so it seems,
This is a secret never to be told,
To be protected & never let unfold.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-06-26 12:32:07]
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Re: Princess In Love
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by blueheart on
Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 10:16:09 PM AEST
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Enchanting piece....
Its like a perfected fairy tale. Good job. |
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Re: Princess In Love
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by loveisendless on
Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 10:53:43 PM AEST
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SOUNDS LIKE A FAIRYTALE FACT! THE BETTER IT IS THE LESS PEOPLE SHOULD KNOW!! OTHERWISE IT'S NOT SO PERFECT ANYMORE!!! WONDERFUL WRITE PIXIE!!!!
DAN!!!!! |
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Re: Princess In Love
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 07:00:39 AM AEST
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I have to echo the sentiments of others on this one.
A fairytale quality to it, but maybe it isn't only fairytales where secret loves exist
steve |
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Re: Princess In Love
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by Luinil on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 09:44:34 AM AEST
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| really creative and pretty, one of my favorites * |
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Re: Princess In Love
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by RhythmBndt on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 11:46:47 AM AEST
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| Beautiful :) |
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Re: Princess In Love
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by yellow_sundragon on
Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 12:35:48 PM AEST
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Thats sad that it's a secret... I've had a couple of those, and they never end well...
Great poem, though...
Jaime |
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Re: Princess In Love
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by faith_my_eyes on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 10:05:34 PM AEST
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| beautiful tale of a tortured love |
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