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to see you again
Contributed by
viola
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Monday, 21st October 2002 @ 05:15:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Loving you is killing me,
but to be without would be worse.
All I think is how to get to you,
while trying to stay away.
To say I'm riding on confusion
is to say so very little.
Soon we'll have no choice
but look at each other again,
my head rattles with the possibilities-
yet my heart continues to break.
Copyright ©
viola
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2002-10-21 17:15:00]
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Re: to see you again
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by Jackee_line on
Monday, 21st October 2002 @ 08:35:04 PM AEST
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| Wow, nice poem, I`ve been there. |
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Re: to see you again
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by RANE on
Tuesday, 22nd October 2002 @ 03:59:25 AM AEST
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OMG!!!!!.....
I had my heart 'broken' (again) by 'him' 2day, but this time was different....this time it seemed like more his 'fault'....and I 'lOve' him,and want him 2 lOve me back (the same)......but I'm soooo hurt, + I tyr not 2 think about it, still all I can do is think about it and cry.....
I FEEL completely 'torn'.....one part of me wants 2 go back.....2him, 'cause I'm sooooo 'alone ' here without him; have no 'home ' here without him.....but the other part of me.....is 2 'hurt' (2 proud 2 'give in' again).....wants 2 wait 4 him 2 come 2 me.....but then, I'm sooooo afraid 2 just wait.....'cause I'm sooooooooo scared he WON'T 'come 2 me', and I don't want 2 just 'wait' here all alone; HURTING all alOne, + just wondering if I'm the only one who REALLY CARES.....anyways....sOrry 4 the rambles.....it's just.....this, U'r words.....really touched something in me....i was reading through all these poems , just trying 2 find the words that describe how I'm FEELING (so I wouldn't Be so 'alone)....+ then I read this.....+ ......I think I found thOse words, that strange comfort.....anyways.....
This is an AMAZING write!!!!!.....
(+ I know it's not 'for' 'me') but.....
.....THANK U..... |
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Re: to see you again
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by OysterMoon on
Tuesday, 22nd October 2002 @ 05:41:16 AM AEST
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| wow, great read! |
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