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UNTITLED
Contributed by
meg
on
Monday, 21st October 2002 @ 05:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I CRIED OUT TO YOU IN ONE SIMPLE CALL
IT WENT UNANSWERED
UNHEARD
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YOU TREATED IT LIKE NOTHING,
I CRAVED YOUR ATTENTION
MY HEART BURNED FOR IT
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I CRIED OUT TO YOU IN ONE SIMPLE CALL
& YOU DID NOTHING
I WONDERED
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IF YOU CARED
WOULD EVER CARE
EVER WONDERED
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OR WOULD EVER WONDER
WHY I WAS GONE
DEAD; NOT A TRACE LEFT
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I CRIED OUT TO YOU IN ONE SIMPLE CALL
BUT IT WASNT ENOUGH
ENOUGH FOR YOU TO KNOW
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SOMETHING WAS WRONG
MORE THEN I COULD TAKE
MORE THEN I COULD HANDLE
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I CRIED OUT TO YOU IN ONE SIMPLE CALL
Copyright ©
meg
... [
2002-10-21 17:00:00]
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Re: UNTITLED
(User Rating: 1 )
by Chrissylee on
Monday, 21st October 2002 @ 06:20:18 PM AEST
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its hard when you give your love to someone only to get burnt and not have them love you in return i know that feeling very well but now i have found true love ... i hope you have moved on and that you find someone true,
love peace and happy poetry |
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Re: UNTITLED
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by norticus on
Tuesday, 22nd October 2002 @ 04:08:41 AM AEST
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| I didn't like it. I give it a 2.2 on the Nortiscale. |
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