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im without you
Contributed by
babyboobooangel
on
Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 08:38:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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i look into darkness as to day
my life now in dismay
my strenth leaving me
my wounds open again
i sit here and wait for you
my guiding light
my love its you
your gone now
for but a while
my hearts beats your name
but you are not to blame
this trouble keeps up away
as i fight through night and day
one last word i must say
i love you
apart for many a day
from once we spent as we may
time together never bleak
my will and hope leaves me for my fear is all but weak
i drown my sorrows in my dreams
but inside i want to scream
my reason gone
but for how long
now i sit without day or night
how much time left to fight
all this emptyness i must endure
for you are my cure
once you return and calm my soul
my story my cry can be let go
my rage and pain my hate and shame
my life moves but by a frame
i sit here with hope of heart
hope that we must never be apart
i will wait many a day more
for my love for you is for sure
Evelina i know you are alone
i sit here with thought of phone
wanting to hear your voice
but i have no other choise
i much sit and wait
time will pass and day will break
i will awake to the morning glow
and at this time i will know
you will be there for my heart to show
all this love you need to know
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2004-06-26 08:38:55]
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Re: im without you
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by pixie on
Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 10:28:47 AM AEST
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awwww this must be awful i know how you feel,m if i am away from my bloke for more than a few hours i miss him like mad...
takecare, very good expression of love and feelings.
pixie xx |
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Re: im without you
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by mountainhigh on
Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 11:20:18 AM AEST
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This is very sweet and moving, separation is always hard on friends, but a love to be separated is more than pain.
I hope for a very fast reunion and may you never be parted again.
Thank you,
Chris |
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Re: im without you
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by BrandySwanson on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 05:53:53 AM AEST
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at least your girlfriend or wife will return to you soon. my ex boyfriend has been dead for 7 years and i miss him so much. i know a little on how you must be feeling . its very sad to be away from each other for even one day.
Brandy |
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Re: im without you
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by gary on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 07:01:49 AM AEST
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| I thought, it was a good poem. I wanted too know more. And I hope you have another that is equal in expression. |
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Re: im without you
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by Stoney1 on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 12:16:58 PM AEST
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Sounds like you need some outside interests.
I hope you're not really that dependent on your significant other, for there resides too much power to hurt you.
Stoney |
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