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~Hope~
Contributed by
jackee_line
on
Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 08:04:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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Under construction
brick by brick,building my wall
brings safety within....
Copyright ©
jackee_line
... [
2004-06-26 08:04:05] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: ~Hope~
(User Rating: 1 ) by RockNwhls on
Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 10:53:00 AM AEST (User
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nicely written |
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Re: ~Hope~
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 03:35:51 PM AEST (User
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beautiful:) hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: ~Hope~
(User Rating: 1 ) by lovingcritters on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 12:31:06 AM AEST (User
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Well constructed poem.......but please throw the brick saway......they are hard as stone....and soon that's the way your heart will be........loving others.........also loves thee!
Love you
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Re: ~Hope~
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 12:05:30 AM AEST (User
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you cant protect yourself from yourself =] |
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Re: ~Hope~
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Monday, 23rd January 2006 @ 04:17:51 AM AEST (User
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Very sad but beautifully stated.
huggs,
emy |
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