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I'm Filled With Brokenness
Contributed by
deathdrop
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Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 06:02:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
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The way you’re going on,
You’ll make me depressed before I even get there!
And then you’ll go on,
Making me feel small,
Because I couldn’t handle the pressure! Of it all.
When what am I meant to do?
Live life to the full??
Well, you know I don’t wanna be here!
So what you say is bull!
You tell me how to live my life,
That’s some thing I hate!
You’re breaking me in half,
Inside my twisted fate!
I don’t know what to do,
I don’t know what to say.
You can make me feel so sad!
And then you ask!
Why I run away…
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2004-06-26 06:02:15]
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Re: I'm Filled With Brokenness
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by Chaitnyanand on
Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 06:48:36 AM AEST
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Dear Deathdrop,
AAWwwwwo !...so sad...so heart touching poem !! Looking forward to your up coming poems.
Love & Peace !
Chait... |
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Re: I'm Filled With Brokenness
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by Jackee_line on
Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 07:54:54 AM AEST
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| A touching poem , well written. |
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Re: I'm Filled With Brokenness
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by little_genna on
Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 08:50:15 AM AEST
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very touching indeed. i can feel your pain, as i feel the same. i want to run which i have but i found it solves nothing just as having a full blown argument. but im here for ya!! great poem.
love and hugs
gen xx |
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Re: I'm Filled With Brokenness
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by lostinmyself on
Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 10:13:32 AM AEST
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Aww hun...
*hugs Rosie*
Anything i can do?
im here if you need to talk...
it doesnt matter if you want to talk about the weather, im here.
hope you are here soon.
*hugs* phil xxx |
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Re: I'm Filled With Brokenness
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by pixie on
Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 10:47:37 AM AEST
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well expressed Death Drop.....
takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: I'm Filled With Brokenness
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by Justalady on
Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 01:52:16 PM AEST
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| Hope things are better.... the only sad thing about running away is you never know how far you must go to get away, and the way back is always longer. God bless. June |
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