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All that you make me
Contributed by
evil1
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Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 02:55:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I was hurt and didn't believe,
that anyone would ever truly love me,
though many told me they loved me so,
to them it was just an entertainment show,
you made me think that love could be true,
that love does exist inside of you,
you opened your heart and let me through,
you opened your soul,
so strong and true,
i don't think you'll ever know,
just how much i love you,
love you so,
so do forgive me if i cry,
I'm not as strong as you are,
though i try,
you mean everything to me,
more than the world, life, or even the galaxy,
i can live without the stars, clouds, or the sky,
but life without you,
i would just die,
Ive loved you since the beginning of time,
i pray each night you'll always be mine,
i love you as much as anyone can,
for you will always be....All I Am
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evil1
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2004-06-26 02:55:27]
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Re: All that you make me
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by emystar on
Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 04:33:10 AM AEST
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A very good write about an enchanting moment of enlightement.
Very good write and testiment to luv.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: All that you make me
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by pixie on
Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 05:27:31 AM AEST
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wow, great poem
pixie xx |
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Re: All that you make me
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by kidpoet_213 on
Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 09:57:33 AM AEST
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Awww... this is truly a beautiful write... and someone s very lucky to have u in their life... hope they feel the same...
Reading this almost brought tears to my eyes... keep writing...
~Donna~
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Re: All that you make me
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by Kirby on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 12:29:43 PM AEST
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| I loved this poem so much. It says soo much in the way you wrote it. I could see this as wedding vows. Great write. It was just soo lovely and wonderful. Love::::Kirby |
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