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Silence Everything
Contributed by
Living_In_My_Dream
on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 11:49:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Silent voices
Silent tears
Silent kisses
Silent years
Silent sorrow
Silent night
Silent madness
Silent flight
Silent burning
Silent breath
Silent bleeding
Silent death
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2004-06-25 23:49:06]
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Re: Silence Everything
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by rugby_player on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 11:50:47 PM AEST
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| wahooooo!!!!!!!!!!!something i don't have to think to hard about great job.....i really liked it |
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Re: Silence Everything
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by emystar on
Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 01:17:09 AM AEST
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Very silent write that speaks so loud.
good work.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Silence Everything
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by bluoreo on
Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 04:44:28 AM AEST
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| This does say a lot. You dont need a lot of words to write something powerful, and you certainly showed that. Awesome write. |
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Re: Silence Everything
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by pixie on
Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 05:53:45 AM AEST
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simple and creative, a great poem
pixie xx |
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Re: Silence Everything
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by spooky on
Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 10:36:31 AM AEST
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| I could never understan why people write about suiside,,your to special and needed,,you have a gift of words,,share them,,beauty,,life,,hope,,love,gifts that you have,,a friend in words,,spooky |
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Re: Silence Everything
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by Jishes_4_ever on
Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 02:59:05 PM AEST
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This was a very short poem, like you said.
But also, like you said, it does say a lot.
Great write
Jishes |
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Re: Silence Everything
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by xxbreathlessx on
Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 11:11:15 PM AEST
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| i thought tht somthing so simple couldnt hold much meaning and depth but u sure as hell proved me WRONG! the ending is ...... it juss catches ur attention and i dunno..wow..its great!... |
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