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Swallowing Blades
Contributed by
Living_In_My_Dream
on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 10:55:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I feel Im in hell
here for you,
my soul to sell
any price to make me real
any price to make me feel
each time I look back
at the fading shadows
they seem even more beautiful
each time I let the created blood drip
more and more of my future I sip
I look through the swelling torpedo
my tears crying black as night
I think this is me putting up with the fight
youve got me all wrong
Im still singing my silent song
louder and louder
the silence gets louder
my mind gets hazy
but the silence is even louder
I shut myself out
not able to think
I learn so much more
about myself then
this vindictive mind behavior
is getting people to fall in love with it
more people to make happy,
get hurt
I'm a broken record
playing a perfect unscratched song
everything being right,
makes everything so wrong
I'm forcefully, caressingly
swallowing blades
shading my eyes
as my oblivion fades
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Living_In_My_Dream
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2004-06-25 22:55:28]
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Re: Swallowing Blades
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 11:08:37 PM AEST
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I thought this was very good not quite sure what the 'swelling torpedo' was though. Was it refering to drinking and just draining it all back or what??? Anyway I liked this a lot.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Swallowing Blades
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by rugby_player on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 11:45:43 PM AEST
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| bravo.....thats all i can say bravo |
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Re: Swallowing Blades
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by pixie on
Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 06:25:24 AM AEST
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very deep write,
pixie xx |
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Re: Swallowing Blades
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by xxbreathlessx on
Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 11:14:37 PM AEST
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| u manage to awe me once again...pure talent... |
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Re: Swallowing Blades
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by deadbloodyrose on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 01:01:49 AM AEST
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| very powerfrul and creative.. the title captures me and draws me in.. nicely done.. AMI JO |
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