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Illusions
Contributed by
spooky
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Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 09:36:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Looking into the mirror,,
what do I see,,
An Illusion of a person,,
that maybe i like to be,,
hopeing to have the chances
that he does,,
but the chances are, just an Illusion,,
looking into the mirror,,
I see things that might be,,
hopeing to see the things,
that makes who I am,,
knowing that it isn't true,
It's all an Illusion to me,,
can't live on dreams of Illusions,,
So i close my eye's,,
and realize that I'm proud,
of who I am,,
A person with a heart,,
a peron who cares for others,,
a person who's not in the mirror,,
for he's just an Illusion to me,,
be proud your not them,,
or otherwise,,
your just an Illusion to me,,,,
craig s. meeks
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spooky
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Re: Illusions
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 09:40:18 PM AEST
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| amazing write. so true. |
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Re: Illusions
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 09:44:10 PM AEST
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yes I agree a very amazing write full of truth I liked this one alot it flowed and had its own type of I dont know jift you might say I liked it...very good excellent...
read and comment my stuff if you want Id love to hear what you think...
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Re: Illusions
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 10:01:55 PM AEST
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Craig, this is a wonderful write. Stay as sweet as you are..
Your friend,
Jenni |
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Re: Illusions
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by blueheart on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 10:45:43 PM AEST
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| Splendid write. |
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Re: Illusions
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by pixie on
Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 06:32:59 AM AEST
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great poem..
pixie xx |
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Re: Illusions
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 07:47:03 AM AEST
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the truth is within the self ...we but need to look to the person deep within
Shari |
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